#87 Bewilderment
1 day ago
Posted in Edward Lear, Limericks | 5 comments
just wanted to return the favor for posting a comment on my blog. Thank you so much for the soundbite idea. Know I just need to figure out the HTML for it =p.
oh and at work later today maybe i'll try writing a limerick, keyword maybe.
My verse is worst, yours real good
Need to rehearse, that's what I should
Gimme some time
to correct my crime
Ghastly it might be! but I'll come good!
I will practice more and rehearse
like a gallant knight on a horse
now is my meter right
or should I keep up the fight
The meter's killing like a slow killing curse!
Your lines couldn't be any worse
It's clear that you didn't rehearse
It's odd in the meter
& hard on the reader
I'd pay you, but never per-verse
Gary Hallock